LONELY BOYWhen he speaks it is not a pleasing sound;
His voice sounds like monkeys in a circus; When he talks he sounds like a basset hound; It sounds like stuck in his throat is mucus. Pimples on his face look like moon craters; His nose is down and droopy like squid ward; When he enters he attracts no haters; His eyes are the color of a fresh turd; His stench is of cheap expired colon; His smell reminds me of smelly trash cans; No wonder why he is always alone; He smells so bad after he has just ran. The boy is lonely because of his flaws; But for me he always puts me in awe. |
1. Why did you choose this as your best work?I choose this as my best work because I put a lot thought and effort into this sonnet. I also enjoyed learning about William Shakesphere because it showed how people in the 1500's and 1600's used figuartive launguage. It also showed how English used to be different.
2. What strengths does this work show about you as a writer?My sonnet shows my strength to use figurative language, and ability to use limited words. It also shows my own personal writing style.
3. What steps did you take to make this a successful piece?I dedicated a lot of time and effort to write my own sonnet in my own style. I first looked up different sonnet examples to see how others wrote their own sonnet. After I created my own masterpiece which landed me an A+.
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